As a writer, your job is to torture your readers with tension. The fun of fiction is anticipation, and if your story doesn't have it your readers won't stick around. Here are 3 ways you might be killing your story's tension and losing readers.
Every person is born a twin. One is evil and one is good. Your twin died at birth; the government is t sure which one you are. They make their best guess and send you to one of the territories when you turn sixteen. They choose wrong;