This says, I always wondered why somebody did'nt do something about that, then i realized I am somebody. It has punctuation errors, misspelled words. I always wondered why someone didn't do something about that, then i realized I am somebody.
This on is more abstract, and it forces the reader in to read the bottom of the poster. That's good because it pulls the viewer in, but it also may act as a deterent because the viewer has to work harder to understand its meaning. Some people might walk away.
Illustration for Homelessness charity, Christmas fund raising camaign.